2007-07-23 23:41:05哈哈
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I feel lazy reacently.
I will hardly push myself.
I tought about bidder’s SOP.
I want my church to be a amorous church
Because I went to a speech many weeks ago.
Their bider is very good.
I want my church be like that.
So I told to my paster.
He ask me to wroted a SOP for him.
I was so exciting.
We must brighten in this world.
I decided to go to the Pin-Doung university.
It’s really far for me.
And I’m afeard that I can’t study well.
I’ll never behave like before.
I’ll study harder in my university’s life.
I will hardly push myself.
I tought about bidder’s SOP.
I want my church to be a amorous church
Because I went to a speech many weeks ago.
Their bider is very good.
I want my church be like that.
So I told to my paster.
He ask me to wroted a SOP for him.
I was so exciting.
We must brighten in this world.
I decided to go to the Pin-Doung university.
It’s really far for me.
And I’m afeard that I can’t study well.
I’ll never behave like before.
I’ll study harder in my university’s life.
"I wanna my church is a amorous church."
shouldn`t use wanna here
"i want my church to be a amorous church."
"Because I went to a speech many weeks ago."
in this case, i suggest u use presentation instead of speech.
"I want my church can be that." just a little bit "i want my church be like that."
"We must be a bright in this word." wrong form...should be "we must brighten this world."
"And I’m afeard about I can’t study well."
wrong spelling and grammar for this sentence.
"and i`m affraid that i can`t study well."
for last sentence it`s i`ll study "harder" not hard.
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Why I can`t use the wanna here?
2007-07-24 22:18:50
coz wanna stand for "want to", so u must have a verb after wanna