2007-07-24 22:23:07哈哈
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I felt tird.
Because I finished the bidder’s SOP only several minutes ago.
It spent a lot of my energy.
My homework haven’t done.
But I want to sleep now.
It’s so terrible.
Pig hat,grandmom,and I his went to buy a DVD this afternoon.
I found "The Family Man" so many places.
But I can’t find it today.
It a old movies that was produced in 2000.
It’s 7 years ago.
So I ordered form ASIA which near the Neihu high school.
I’m not sure that I can take the movie.
He told me when he check the goods.
He will contact me.
I hope I can get the movie.
Because I finished the bidder’s SOP only several minutes ago.
It spent a lot of my energy.
My homework haven’t done.
But I want to sleep now.
It’s so terrible.
Pig hat,grandmom,and I his went to buy a DVD this afternoon.
I found "The Family Man" so many places.
But I can’t find it today.
It a old movies that was produced in 2000.
It’s 7 years ago.
So I ordered form ASIA which near the Neihu high school.
I’m not sure that I can take the movie.
He told me when he check the goods.
He will contact me.
I hope I can get the movie.
You have tried hard to learn English, and i did find some mistakes in your writing. I am sorry that i found out that i don`t have too much time to answer your all leters. Please print them on pieces of paper and i can spend little time during our class time.
Chat later.
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Thanks a lot.If this is conveniet for u.
And I can improve rapidly.
That will be a good ideal. 2007-07-25 23:34:41
"I" spent lots of my energy. coz "it" can`t spent anything.
"My homework haven`t been done yet" is what u tried to say right? 這是現在完成被動式
"Pig hat,grandmom,and I his went to buy a DVD this afternoon.
I found "The Family Man" so many places."
can`t understand these two sentences...
The rest part is OK...but need more adorn