2007-07-14 23:28:01哈哈
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Today , I learned a lot.
Because Daniel(祥哲) just told me some English grammar.
I really hope my English can improve repidly(迅速).
And if everybody saw those paper have some grammar’s wrong.
Please tell me.
Tanks!!
Eric(逸民) with no key this afternoon.
He and I went to Nanhu high school.
There was a high school matriculation(入學許可) test today
We played cards there.
We had fun.
Then I went to the church.
I’m thanking for god for today.
I have good time.
Willing to glory will go to you.
Because Daniel(祥哲) just told me some English grammar.
I really hope my English can improve repidly(迅速).
And if everybody saw those paper have some grammar’s wrong.
Please tell me.
Tanks!!
Eric(逸民) with no key this afternoon.
He and I went to Nanhu high school.
There was a high school matriculation(入學許可) test today
We played cards there.
We had fun.
Then I went to the church.
I’m thanking for god for today.
I have good time.
Willing to glory will go to you.
"I really hope that I can progress rapidly English."
it got a better and easier way to say it like "i really hope my English can improve repidly."
"Eric have no key this afternoon." should change "with" to "have"
"Today have a high school matriculation tests." hm...sounds a bit strange
it can be changed to "There was a high school matriculation test today." and the next sentence sohuld be we "played" cards there.
these are the big mistakes, but yeah...u`ll improve by writing the diary everyday=ˇ=
it`s just the thing to do with time!
It just began. 2007-07-15 18:27:31