2007-07-15 18:49:40哈哈
７/１５
Today is a important day.
Nearly one third(1/3) of people in my church went to korea(韓國).
There is a prayer camp in the mountains.
I want to go with them.
But I didn’t graduate.
I need to studied again for one subject this summer vocation.
So maybe I can pray for them in Taiwan.
This Saterday is still going fellowship.
I need to break the ice first.
Then we will watching the move.
” Pursuit of Happyness ” (當幸福來敲門)
I hope the fellowship will be good!
Heard that the day before yesterday is Friday the 13th .
It really cool!!
Nearly one third(1/3) of people in my church went to korea(韓國).
There is a prayer camp in the mountains.
I want to go with them.
But I didn’t graduate.
I need to studied again for one subject this summer vocation.
So maybe I can pray for them in Taiwan.
This Saterday is still going fellowship.
I need to break the ice first.
Then we will watching the move.
” Pursuit of Happyness ” (當幸福來敲門)
I hope the fellowship will be good!
Heard that the day before yesterday is Friday the 13th .
It really cool!!
Actually the first sentece is strange...
"Nearly 1/3 of people in my church went to korea." i think it will be better to say it this way
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I revised.
2007-07-16 22:41:36
well, i find some mistakes
"There has a prayer camp in the mountains."
actually,we don`t use there"has"
we use "there are" or "there is"
so remember!! its a rule
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I revised.
2007-07-16 22:08:34
oh! novy teacher
ha!
So cool~~~
Novy teacher!! 2007-07-17 18:12:11