2007-07-13 23:35:14哈哈
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I overslept this morning.
Because I think my mom will wake me up.
But she didn’t.
And I didn’t set the alarm clocks, either.
Therefor I allowed myself to have a vocation.
But I’m sorry for E.J.
I didn’t told her.
I went to see the chinese doctor at this afternoon.
Then I came to a meeting in evening.
I do it by the end of the day.
This diary’s sentence not necessarily come from me .
When I have no idea.
I use translation machines.
But I’m try to do the best!!
Because I think my mom will wake me up.
But she didn’t.
And I didn’t set the alarm clocks, either.
Therefor I allowed myself to have a vocation.
But I’m sorry for E.J.
I didn’t told her.
I went to see the chinese doctor at this afternoon.
Then I came to a meeting in evening.
I do it by the end of the day.
This diary’s sentence not necessarily come from me .
When I have no idea.
I use translation machines.
But I’m try to do the best!!
you can ask Novy to help you
that will be better!!
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Novy English is very good.But she explained I could not accept.
I still told her can correct me.
Thank for ur suggest!! 2007-07-14 23:52:05
it`s me again =ˇ=
come and correct=ˇ=
firly u have to know that oversleep is a verb, which means u don`t need a be verb in front of it. so, the first sentence should be "i overslept this morning." should use past tense i think...not really sure, better double check with others.
"Therefor I allowed myself to a vocation."
u need a verb between to and a, like "have".
"I’m not told her." grammar mistake again
sohuld be "i didn`t tell her."
u don`t really need "at" uin front of this afternoon in the situation for "I went to see the chinese doctor at this afternoon.
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hope these help =ˇ=
Those suggestion will help me a lot.
Thanks again. 2007-07-15 18:21:16