2003-03-20 14:13:08三得

流動的詩

〈之一〉
宛如舌下酒
灑在昨日的傷口
不痛,不痛
何必強吞一把火
熊熊入喉?

〈之二〉
當月光伸手
輕輕剝落
女媧補天的一塊石頭
洶湧的世界
從此有了出口

〈之三〉
桿碎浪作白銀
化石頭為流金
這柔荑
可否
點詩成睛?

〈之四〉
為古文明哭墓
沙子盲目
將詩眼當珠貝
又遺珠風中
不知含淚的風
沒有腳蹤

〈之五〉
於焉天涯
有了盛開的雲朵
周圍幾聲杜鵑
若絮語款款
飄搖人間
十仁 30號 潘芯吟 2014-02-10 22:02:24

After looking the artitle finish,I really admire the prince and the swallow!Because they had given all themselves to the peoples whom they need helps although they had sacrificed themselves.This story also made me think that helping people can bring us happy.Even if the people whom you have helped didn’t gratitude you.You may also feel a lot of joyful in your heart.Now,there are many people need help around the world.Those who had lived in rich should be help those people who need help.Let the world bring not only more happiness and happy but also a lot of warm!

十仁32號彭子欣 2014-02-10 21:16:13

The Happy Prince is a very warm story.I like this story because the prince use his body to make other people be happy.I need to larn what prince do,use own power to help other people. We don't need to worried about our next meal but some family need.I think we should help poor people to make their life more comfortable. In the end of story prince and swallow died.They are very large that they in order to help others and lay down their life.
The story makes me understand we need help people by action,not just only talk about it.To help,we will be happy and so do other.It just a win-win situation.

十仁32號 2014-02-10 21:11:46

The Happy Prince is a very warm story.I like this story because the prince use his body to make other people be happy.I need to larn what prince do,use own power to help other people. We don't need to worried about our next meal but some family need.I think we should help poor people to make their life more comfortable. In the end of story prince and swallow died.They are very large that they in order to help others and lay down their life.
The story makes me understand we need help people by action,not just only talk about it.To help,we will be happy and so do other.It just a win-win situation.