2007-09-13 00:10:28哈哈
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Today is the important day because of I need to check in the
university.
I really want to see something special in Ping-Dong.
In Genesis 12-1~3.
That is the cause why I choose Ping-Dong technology university.
I hope god can use me in this plase make a big gospel’s bombs!
Whish tomorrow will be a wonderfor day.
university.
I really want to see something special in Ping-Dong.
In Genesis 12-1~3.
That is the cause why I choose Ping-Dong technology university.
I hope god can use me in this plase make a big gospel’s bombs!
Whish tomorrow will be a wonderfor day.
不是"plase",是"place"
不是whish",是"wish"
可能打太急了吧
記得要改喔
版主回應
because I wrote this paper at 12 o`clock.so i was a little tired that moment.
i have a little time don`t wrote english diary.
I belive that will be improve very soon! 2007-09-14 01:47:41
for the first sentence it`s "an important day" not "the important day".
and u don`t need to use "because of", just "because" is enough.
"This was the reason why i choose ..."
not "this is the cause why i chose..."
and the last sentence...i`ve told u by MSN
if u have enough time.
maybe u can see my response and check. 2007-09-14 01:48:02