I FEEL SO SORRY
因為忙碌的關係...
說要幫你看的卻一直沒有ˊˋ
而且...(本人英打不好 要打很久很久才打出一個單字)
我覺得你可以繼續練習你的英文
這是個不錯的方式啊~
如果沒有錯誤的話
我就不幫你更正囉
有錯的話
我就會幫你打上去><
SO,DON`T GIVE UP PRACTICING WRITING YOUR ENGLISH DIARY
OK?

haha~
at least i correct the basic mistakes u have in ur diary. We r not good at english since we were born, that`s why u need practices. of course to write in english is important, but u need to read more text book and of course, start from the basics.
i know it is boring but u must do it to improve ur english gradually.