得到了老師的認證，雖然整篇短文內的論點不足、申述有限，但光是就這篇譯詩可以獲得肯定，心裡還是挺高興的，在此也把它記錄下來。

顧太清的《早春怨‧春夜》

　　楊柳風斜‧黃昏人靜，
　　睡穩栖鴉‧短燭燒殘，
　　長更坐盡，小篆添些。
　　紅樓不閉窗紗‧
　　被一縷、
　　春痕暗遮‧淡淡輕煙，
　　溶溶院落‧月在梨花。

Willow oblique by the wind when dusk the quietness everywhere among street
Ravens in its deep sleep when the short candle burning its last life
In the long night I sat spent till the end with more calligraphies
Red castle left the window open with gauze
Covered a satinette
Spring trail concealed in the slightly soft mist
Melting in the garden, the moon as on the Lihua