2012-11-24 16:58:40Pen Knight

深秋詩習作



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深秋詩習作

 

馬蹄踢踏踢踏響

桂花飄散飄散香

古詩一段一段創

癡筆壓鍵壓鍵忙

 

 

雙語詩:習作

 

一日為師終生為父
One day’s teacher, life time’s mentor

一篇韻詩,通篇韻賦

One verse’s poem, all verse’s rhyme

 

對句

 

網海悠遊閱賞千格萬書

人海浮沉歷透千峰萬谷

 

曼殊沙華 2012-12-12 22:58:51

Thanks for your apprecation.
I am ashamed to have it. ^^"""

版主回應
You are welcome.

You have good writing talent(達才)
and are so good at poem amd photo shooting.


Have a nice weekend!
2012-12-15 09:18:45
曼殊沙華 2012-11-28 00:51:06

呵呵~怎麼感覺這秋意好特別哦!
感覺像是有趣的打油詩. ^^""""

夜安 ^^

版主回應
呵呵!!
秋天ㄉ馬路上可以跑馬賞桂花唄!
您滴雙語詩Flower Dance
寫ㄉ很令讀者入境
I wanna say : you are a sparkler

安安
2012-11-28 23:50:11