2007-03-06 21:11:15裂痕
My Winter Vacation
In winter, our family went to Tainan to see there because we don’t go to there in the long time and see my dad’s friend in junior high school. My dad say:” I don’t see my friends in four years.” I think my dad is very happy because he can see and talk each other with his friends today.
On that day, I wake up at nine o’clock. We went to Leh Leh’s house to see Leh Leh because he will take our car to Tainan. Leh Leh is my dad’s friend in junior high school, too. So we take my dad car from Taipei to Tainan after we leave Leh Leh’s house. I think this vacation will be good!
When we come to Tainan, it’s four o’clock! We drove four hours from Taipei to Tainan, it’s a long time, no wander I feel tired. You can see many old and beautiful building. First, we went to my dad’s friend’s bakery, the shop’s name is John’s bakery. We ate and played here in night.
Second afternoon we went to TK FOOD to see how make cookies. TK FOOD is my dad’s friend’s factory. There are making cookies in Chiayi. I knew making cookies isn’t easy, it’s so heard! And we went to Taipei.
I think the two winter’s vacation’s days is very interesting because I can see many Taina’s old friends and I can go TK FOOD factory to see how to makes cookies. I think I get a lot of knowledge. It’s a funny winter vacation!
本人很少用英文打出文章,若有不好之處敬請見諒,也希望可以給予指教,例如文法有錯的、單字拼錯的。
On that day, I wake up at nine o’clock. We went to Leh Leh’s house to see Leh Leh because he will take our car to Tainan. Leh Leh is my dad’s friend in junior high school, too. So we take my dad car from Taipei to Tainan after we leave Leh Leh’s house. I think this vacation will be good!
When we come to Tainan, it’s four o’clock! We drove four hours from Taipei to Tainan, it’s a long time, no wander I feel tired. You can see many old and beautiful building. First, we went to my dad’s friend’s bakery, the shop’s name is John’s bakery. We ate and played here in night.
Second afternoon we went to TK FOOD to see how make cookies. TK FOOD is my dad’s friend’s factory. There are making cookies in Chiayi. I knew making cookies isn’t easy, it’s so heard! And we went to Taipei.
I think the two winter’s vacation’s days is very interesting because I can see many Taina’s old friends and I can go TK FOOD factory to see how to makes cookies. I think I get a lot of knowledge. It’s a funny winter vacation!
本人很少用英文打出文章,若有不好之處敬請見諒,也希望可以給予指教,例如文法有錯的、單字拼錯的。
leh leh
2007-03-07 01:17:35
Well,who would have thaught it happened.At least,everybody saw it that you wrote something in english .No matter what you wanted to tell us,we all knew you have pick up your courage to do it.That`s enough.
才幾個單字,字典翻到眼花,以後英文還是你老爸回應較恰當.
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恩.......
2007-04-01 15:02:58
You are very good!
I thought I can`t do this well
Do you know who I am?
I`m your sister Cheng Yi!