2007-10-22 20:53:41蘇珊

Love poem

A Response to Passionate Shepherd to His Love

Standing another side of the keyhole,
I see a man taking a key of load
Hesitating to prepare for his oath,
Well enough, l’amour finally decoded

For long, I lived with shadow overhead,
Sleeping with a nimbus above my bed,
Trapped in the past, I find myself out of breath
Come you to the fore, let things go ahead.

Topple my past; you strike me by your eyes,
Blockade is finally withdrawn tonight.
(I) Set aside a little space of my mind,
Unlock the door to let your love abides.

Open my heart, I need your directions
Escort me to the next inspiration,
Motivate to present my whole passion.
(Cuz) Be with you is my last aspiration.

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^0^ This is my assignment for my British Literature Class!!
It takes 2hr30min to finish...haha...that’s why i post it here for remeberance!!! ^00^
Susann 2007-11-06 14:36:48

Well~~ 我估計並不是你英文差, 只是我英文更差, 寫來的都是垃圾!! ^0^

瑪瓜 2007-10-28 23:24:14

怪我英文差.我睇唔明