2007-07-11 23:23:32哈哈
７/１１
Today is Lily’s birthday.
Without Novy said , I forgot.
But I still have a whole lot of good fortune to give you.
Re-starting today ,I will write diary in English every day.
I need a lot of practice to earn my English.
Whether godd or bad , I will try right now.
Without Novy said , I forgot.
But I still have a whole lot of good fortune to give you.
Re-starting today ,I will write diary in English every day.
I need a lot of practice to earn my English.
Whether godd or bad , I will try right now.
下一篇：７/１２
thank you!
do your best
i know you can
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I`m very sorry about that.Next time I will bear in mind.
And thanks a lot for your encouraged! 2007-07-13 13:08:14
got something wrong in ur writing =ˇ=
"Without Novy said , I forgot."
i think u wanted to say "if Novy didn`t say it i would gorget it." and need a lot of practices to "improve" my English, don`t think earn will do...
and for last sentence it should be "no matter how it will be, i`ll try it right now."
hope these correction will help =ˇ=
And I will continue to try it. 2007-07-14 23:46:00