2011-03-07 13:51:29Awin

Psyche+ Cupid= Pisces

 

Psyche+ Cupid= Pisces

Cupid has two kinds of arrow. One is made of gold, the other is made of lead. If Cupid shoot the gold arrow into someone, the guy would fall in love with the one who been see[W1]  at the first sight.

If Cupid shoot the lead arrow into someone, the guy would be unable to be intimate with others. 

Psyche is natural beauty. She is romantic and kind. She is so beautiful, even the beautiful supernatural Venus is jealous of her.

Though Psyche is beautiful, there is not [W2] any pursuer. Psyche has two sisters, both of them were married, but Psyche even didn’t have a boy friend. Guess why? Cupid likes Psyche, and he shoots the lead arrow into her. Everyone likes her but she is unable to[W3]  be intimate with.

  Of course, Psyche and Cupid got married finally. She was really joyful and happy[W4] . They live in the heaven, but Psyche didn’t know about it. She could get anything she wants. But Cupid was super busy. He had to work...to shoot the arrow. Day by day, many years past, Psyche felt like just few days. She felt lonely, and hoped to[W5]  be back home to see her families. She asked Cupid ”I miss my families, I want to go home to see them for a few days. Can I go home? Will you come with me?” “Of course, you could be back home for a few days, but I can’t come with you.” Psyche doesn’t know she live with a celestial and they live in the heaven yet.

Psyche[W6]  was back her hometown for few days. Her sisters were there. They talked about Cupid. “How is he to you?” “Is he beautiful?”

“Actually, I didn’t’ know what he look like, I even haven’t see[W7] n his face. He was busy. He went home after I fell[W8]  asleep, and went out before I got up every day.”

“Oh, no…are you sleeping beauty? Weren’t you curious of what he look like? I can’t believe it. If he is a monster, what will be your babies?”

“You have to make certain what he look basically.”

“But he will get angry.”

Psyche didn’t say anything then. She became morbidly suspicious of Cupid.

Before she back home, she was happy. But now she was really worried.

At that night she[W9]  was back to Cupid. She couldn’t sleep, and wait for[W10]  Cupid. After Cupid slept, she took out the prepared oil lamp and sharp knife. She wants to kill the monster, but not husband. She planned[W11]  to see clearly the appearance of Cupid. She can't believe when she holds the oil lamp high ...Whom presented in front of her is not any monster (bizarre entity), but the most handsome and most sweet beautiful young man in the world.

 “ Oh, how beautiful and handsome guy.”

Psyche felt guilty and shamed for her ignorance and suspicion[W12] . She kneel down, and the knife droped[W13] . At this moment, Cupid was awake[W14]  and he saw Psyche look at him with the oil lamp. Cupid was so sad, and run crying out. [W15] He remembered every time he talked to her, he kissed her. She was uneasy…He is in more pain.

And Cupid said “Where there is suspicion, there is no love.”

In other words, “The love is set up on trust.”

We must trust ourselves, then be trusted.[W16] 

 

After going through a lot of tests, they bounded.

All Celestials are in order to commemorate their unchanged love and they  granted and called " Pisces "


 [W1]沒有助動詞不會使用過去分詞

 [W2]There後方通常都使用be動詞

 [W3]後方是形容詞,這邊缺一個be動詞

 [W4]And對等連接,前方是joyful後方應使用happy

 [W5]沒有動詞,應為to be back hometo go back home

 [W6]W7

 [W7]前方有助動詞have,後方應該要變成過去分詞

 [W8]過去式才對

 [W9]w7

 [W10]Wait後方加上人要有for

 [W11]應重複字尾

 [W12]And對等連接,前方使用ignorance後方就要使用suspicion

 [W13]為何只有這句話變成現在式?

 [W14]awake

 [W15]這邊為什麼又變成現在式了?

 [W16]應為trusted