2008-02-14 20:13:45Kelly Bao
Fat Guy
Kelly will become a fat guy. Why ? She ate many food in this New Year. She can not stop eat food and she has not go to exercise. The weather is so cold that Kelly does not want to go outside. She is a fat guy now .
what r u writing? the sentence you need to change as follow " the weather is so cold that kelly dose not want to go outside"
and "she ate or she has been eaten so many food in this new year" not eat OK? = =
版主回應
I had changed the sentence . Thank for your advice .
2008-02-19 22:41:43
Control your diet...