Teacher version:(right)
If your work is the sane as your hobby,I think that they are worhtwhile.Because you don’t spent extra time doing differnet things.When you work,you never feel tired on your job.You don’t worry that you never enough time.
But somebody may say,jobs and hobbies are different.It’s very difficult to connection each other.I even saw somebody on TV that is number are in that few.Their hobbies become their job and maintain their life.Beside,they do good more than the other people.For Example one person liked old things.Someday he pick up garbage and can find treasures in it.He does that every day and cleans it all.When the garbage is cleaned by him becames new.He keep his favorite thing and sell the other one.He can make sixty thousand dollar every month.I think that is very wonderful.
So,if your work is the same as your habby.They aer worthwhile.

My version:(error)
If your work is sane with your habby,I think that are worthwhile.Because you don’t spent extra time to do differnet thing.When you work,you never feel tire on your job.You don’t worry you never enough time.
But somebody say,job and hobby is differnet.It’s very difficult to connection each other.I ever saw somebody on TV that is very fineness.Their hobbies become their job and maintain their life.Besid,they do good more than the other people.Example for one people,he liked old things.Someday he find to pick up garbage that can find out treasures.He do that very day and clean all.When the garbage neaten by him,their becames new.He keep his favorite thing and sold the other one.He can make money for sixty thousand every month.I thing that is very wonderful.
So,if your work is the same as your habby.They are worthwile.