看了你做一系列bagel的平面設計，
暖暖的感覺，好喜歡^^

title的“畢業作品”是指...你剛畢業??
你也是讀設計學生囉!!
請多指教^^

A Li Ga Do ! I certainly make a wish in front of the gods for your graduation, but actually for my coupon. ^^

Mm... JT’s idea is great. If the coupon is a bagel on the paper with the same figure, even I forget to use it, I still want to keep it. Probably I will keep it as my collection.

But, anyway, you still make it well. If you can’t give me the box, how about a piece of coupon? ^^

this design is not bad, well done.

But this is my idea for this, you should of make the circle and than a whole in the middle, like a shape of the bagle. Then add the text on it, is a different look. If I was a customer and I saw that in the envolope when I open, I be very surprise and feel there is creative idea behind it. Is like almost a real bagel but on paper, also it leave a image in their mind.

Product design like this, is all about how to catch the customer’s attention. Is almost like commercial but without things moving around, so how can you make the design very strong that stand out. That is what you have to think when you are design things like this.

But overall I like it, the text and the image and overall idea fit together. doing good my friend^^ keep it up