this is an impossible duty
HaHaHa~~!!
This diary will be in English.
Because i want to practice my English.
First i want to say sorry.
Because this diary are very 傷眼.
HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa~~~~~~!!
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Today
I wok up at 8:00 in the morning.
Because I went to Shanghai with my mother and brother.
We need to buy my father's birthday present .
His birthday is on 3/3.
So we need to prepare first.
We went there by bus .
It took us more than 1 hours
We went to "Jinan temple".
My mother went to Jiuguang department store.
And I and my brother went to Animation city.
There selt many many Animation.
In fact I didn't like there.
There are so boring.
Is not my style
But i need to protect my brother.
so sad~~~~!!!!!!
My brother bought a cell phone charm for my father's birthday present.
But I didn't buy anything.
I think my father doesn't like this.
We went back to Jiuguang department store in 12:30.
And we met with mom
My mom bought a razor for my dad.
Then we went to eat "Rice with a thin omlette on top"( 蛋包飯).
I most like this.
so so so ~~delicious food!!!
Finished lunch.
We just went back home.
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wow~~~~!!
I am very very good.
I finish my diary.
HaHaHaHaHaHa~~~~~~!!
嗨嗨~~~ (到目前為止不知道怎麼稱呼你 XD)
不過我有很認真的看完~
看來你那一天的上午過得不錯~~ ㄏㄏ
蛋包飯超好吃的說
你的英文要繼續加油喔~~
這樣才可以去美國讀書 XD
叫我啥都ok阿!!
本名:陳書宇
英文:JASON
(哈哈~~! 馬上先來個自我介紹)
我超愛蛋包飯的!!!!
人家美味阿!!!
真的得加油囉! 2009-02-27 18:06:44
His birthday is in 3/3 ←in 改成 on
We went to there by bus . ←不要to
It’s spent our more 1 hours
←改成 It took us more than 1 hours
我本來想全部糾正你
可是後面錯誤還是滿嚴重的=ˇ=
我也懶得慢慢打了 囧
我沒有要嗆你的意思喔
i see !
我的英文真的要在加油囉~~!! 2009-02-27 18:04:05
你媽勒
這篇覽的看
也看不懂XD
你又罵髒話
不是說不要罵髒話嘛!
哈哈~~!
很多人看不懂
因為文法錯很多!! 2009-03-01 20:49:26