2007-12-09 18:09:37雷雷

The Bird Can’t Fly

I am a bird.





But I can’t fly.





The sky is high.





But I can’t tough.





Everyday I see sky.





Fancy I fly in the high.





If I have useful helpers.





I hope I can fly high.

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~+星月影+~ 2007-12-09 18:26:55

來幫灌灌,不過,我有一個疑問唷,可以問一下吧.....Everyday I see sky.
的Everyday不是時間ㄇ?時間不是要放在後面?請幫幫我解惑.....

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痾......因該說英文詩本身不注重文法,所以因為押韻的關係才把sky放後面(其實我也不知道有沒有押韻啦!這是我隨便寫的ˊˋ) 2007-12-10 23:41:29