(Many years ago,on a sunny day,my parents took my brother and I

to a river which was in a mountain there wasn’t with any lifeguard.)

It was cool in the mountain and the water was ice-cold. Playing in

the water was very confortable and forgot how hot the weather

was.

　　When my brother and I played in the water, my parents sat on the

*bank and chatted with each other. After a while, we were far away

from parents but we were too excited to notice it. Suddenly, I

couldn’t step any stone. I was drowning. I jumped up and down in the

water. My brother wanted to *catcg me but he didn’t have energy

enough. He yelled to my parents. However, it was so far

that they couldn’t hear *ny brother. I drowned in the deep

water and I didn’t have any energy to ask for help. I couldn’t

remember how long I was in the water. I just remembered when I

opened my eyes, I saw my father hold me. I was glad that I could be

safed but was too scared to say any word for a long time.

　　This made me impressive. When I thought about this, I stil

felt *scary.

(Many years ago,on a sunny day,my parents took my brother and I

to a river which was in a mountain there wasn’t with any lifeguard.)

It was cool in the mountain and the water was *ice-cold. (Playing in

the water was very *confortable and forgot how hot the weather

was.)

　　When my brother and I played in the water, my parents sat on the

bank and chatted with each other. After a while, we were far away

from *parents but we were too excited to notice it. Suddenly, I

couldn’t *step any stone. I was drowning. I jumped up and down in the

water. My brother wanted to *catcg me but he didn’t have *energy

*enough. He yelled to my parents. However, it was so far

that they couldn’t hear ny brother. I *drowned in the deep

water and I didn’t have any *energy to *ask for help. I couldn’t

remember *how long I was in the water. I just remembered *when I

opened my eyes, I saw my father *hold me.( I was glad that I could be

*safed but was too scared to say any word for a long time.)

　　*This made me *impressive. When I thought about *this, I stil

felt *scary.

(Many years ago,on a sunny day,my parents took my brother and I

to a river which was in a mountain there wasn’t with any lifeguard.)

It was cool in the mountain and the water was *ice-cold. (Playing in

the water was very *confortable and forgot how hot the weather

was.)

　　When my brother and I played in the water, my parents sat on the

bank and chatted with each other. After a while, we were far away

from *parents but we were too excited to notice it. Suddenly, I

couldn’t *step any stone. I was drowning. I jumped up and down in the

water. My brother wanted to *catcg me but he didn’t have *energy

*enough. He yelled to my parents. However, it was so far

that they couldn’t hear ny brother. I *drowned in the deep

water and I didn’t have any *energy to *ask for help. I couldn’t

remember *how long I was in the water. I just remembered *when I

opened my eyes, I saw my father *hold me.( I was glad that I could be

*safed but was too scared to say any word for a long time.)

　　*This made me *impressive. When I thought about *this, I *stil

felt *scary.