2010-05-26 21:37:09茉莉

自創THE HERO'S JOURNEY((慎入

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要拼死的看喔~

 

“Dang, dang, dang, dang…”the bell rings.  “Class dismissed!” the teacher said.

A quiet classroom suddenly became noisy.  Everyone was talking and playing with each other-except Jason.  Jason slowly walked out his classroom and headed toward a rough, narrow lane that the school had forbidden.

When he walked into the lane, he heard some voice.  He moved closer, and saw two students were talking and seemed like arguing something.  Another student kept staring at the ground, didn’t say anything, seemed like he had been suffered from injustice.

“Is that school bully?” Jason said to himself.

Suddenly, three students yelled together, “Aaaaaaaaa!”

“Oh my God!  What terrible thing is happening?  Why are three boys yelling like a little girl?” Jason said to himself and felt confused.

The next second, Jason thought he knew why were the three students yelling.  He rubbed his eyes and hit himself on his face to see if he was dreaming.  It hurt himself a lot.  It really isn’t a dream.

A snake was growing bigger and bigger, bigger and bigger…

After several minutes, the snake stopped growing. And the students were all standing still but with their mouth open.  The snake halted for a second and started spiting its tongue t-t-t-t-t-t-t. 

And all of a sudden, the snake stared attacking the three students and Jason.  Two students were lucky; they got away from the snake.  But Jason and the other student weren’t that lucky-- the snake still attacking them.  Jason picked up a stick behind the path and fought with it.  The student found a gap and escaped successfully.  At the beginning, they fought against others, but the snake stopped unexpectedly, and windded around his neck.  Just when Jason starts feeling hard to breath, he heard “BANG!” and the snake died.  Jason turned around and saw a girl and a boy that had a smoking gun in his hand. 

“Ahhh…Who are you?” said the boy that had been attacked first. 

The boy wanted to say something, but the girl shook her head to stop him.  However, the boy spoke out loudly, “The world is in danger!  This kind of monster will have more and become more powerful!  We need someone to help killing the monsters.  Would you like to join our organization?”

Terry, they won’t trust us.” whispered the girl to the boy named Terry.

“Well…I trust you.  And I hope I can become more powerful.  Can I…join your organization?” said the student that been attacked first.

“What?  Louie, are you serious?” the other two students said. 

“Is everyone else would like to join our organization?” Terry asked.

“I would like to join you, too, but our parents may not agree.” the other two students said.

“OK, I’ll join you if I can become more powerful.” Jason said.

The girl behind Terry didn’t say anything, but you can surely know that she is shocked by her face with her mouth opening.

“Oops.  I forget to introduce myself.  We are both ninth-grader, and I’m Terry, she is Candice.” Terry said.

“eighth-grader,  Albert.” Albert said, still staring at the ground.

“eighth-grade, Charles.” a student said.

“eighth-grade, Denny.” Another student said.

“eighth-grade, Jason.” said Jason.

“Go to the basement floor on Friday if you can join us.  See you later.” Terry said and walked away with Candice.

When Jason went back home, he felt a little strange.  He started going around the house and inspect.

“Ah ha!  How do you know I am in here?  Just call me Sabrina.” an extraordinary beautiful girl jumped out and said.

“Why can you get in my house without a key?” Jason asked.

“That’s such an easy thing for a monster,” said Sabrina, “A record in the monster’s world said that in the human’s world, A hundred years will have one person that has a special power that named “transmigrate eyes”.  And you are one of them.  I came to teach you how to use the power.  But at first you should become more powerful.”

“Well, I’ve join an organization that will teach me how to kill monsters.  Maybe I can learn something there.  But is that ok that I go to learn how to kill monsters?” Jason asked.

“Are you kidding?  Do you think you can kill a monster that had practiced over 1200 years for just learning how to kill some low grade monsters?” Sabrina said proudly. 

Jason chose a dagger for his weapon, and Albert chose a shield because he thinks that they may need a protector when they’re fighting.  Sabrina also pretended that she was Jason’s older sister and observes them.  Terry taught them some basic action of fighting, and Candice is the group leader.

                                                                              ...to be continued

〝 雪骸 〞 2010-06-11 19:55:14

好強= =||
我都寫不出來...
ㄆㄆ...
我是第一次來唷^0^
請多多指教!!!!

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阿...請多多指教!!((手忙腳亂
哈哈哈 看過黑執事再去妳那有種不同的感受ˇ
歡迎常來呦~
來了就要順便留言 =)
不嫌棄的話,可以跟你做朋友吧?!((笑
2010-06-15 18:54:08
乖貓 2010-05-31 08:48:25

就是要扯ˋ要瞎才有趣嘛ˇˇ
初級不會很難的,不過貓第一次考的時候沒過,因為那時候太小了((小三的時候老媽就說要讓貓跟大姊考考看就被抓去了

可以直接跳考中級的
不過中級倒真的比較難就是了
去年暑假去考,才初試就被刷掉了@@

也對,有的人聽ˋ讀ˋ寫厲害的緊
但遇到正港外國人的時候卻一個字也吐不出來
能聽懂外國人說什麼還能交談多棒
這樣出國旅行很方便ˇˇ

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嗯嗯
說的好 =)
最近好久沒上來了呢~ˇ
2010-06-15 18:49:57
乖貓 2010-05-29 20:59:23

嗯嗯...要幫忙編完的話有點懶的說=ˇ=a
寫的還蠻好的哪
要考過初級英檢(初級大概是國中的程度)的話應該是沒問題的,可以考慮看看
toice的話就不知道了((沒考過這樣ˇˇ

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其實我有寫完 = =,可是覺得很瞎,所以沒放上來XD
我覺得"輪迴眼"那裡最白痴,六道骸阿 ="=
想說要讓他哪裡有特殊能力,又想到大家好像都是在眼睛那裡做文章(ex:白眼、血輪眼、眼睛上有個六的)那個甚麼橡膠人的也太扯 =A=
初級英檢...似乎不會很難阿
我們班的都說很簡單這樣= =a
中級才有人沒考過,所以...可以直接跳著考嗎?
可是其實也沒啥興趣,自己花錢考,還有可能因考不上而傷心...這不是--苦了自己嗎?
還有那個"程度"問題阿...其實覺得不一定耶~因為英文好也不一定要會很多字,只要能即時講英文,而且講的順,我就很滿意了 =)
2010-05-30 18:05:56